The product of my Pokemon of the Opera campaign. This is an animatic, animated story board, so don't be disappointed that there are any lipsinking bits.
Christine- Clefable Raoul- Raichu Eric- Gengar Mr Andre and Firman- Kadabra and combustiken Madame Jeri- Pidgeot Meg Jeri- Pidgeotto
So this is hilarious, but a few comments: One why is Raoul by the staircase when he first realizes its Christine, but then several frames later in the balcony? Also I don't think you should have that upward helix when she takes flight, looks sort of out of place But this is adorable!
Well, Raoul was in the lobby because as the Patron, he just has to be present, that doesn't mean he was watching the show. In my mind he just recognized her voice and charges into his reserve box to see it really was Christine.
As for the double helix, Yeah it does seem out of place. But I wanted to convey that she is spiraling like a rocket when she takes off.
put her in a three quarter view and have her arms sort of wrappin across her chest in the same direction (if you understand what I mean) that shouldd help convey the spiral you're looking for with out putting in the helix
As for the double helix, Yeah it does seem out of place. But I wanted to convey that she is spiraling like a rocket when she takes off.